Warrior Princess

I don't know if I'd class this as a short story, as there isn't much plot or character development. However, the piece itself is well written and interesting. I have ...

I really liked this piece. It started out looking like a random apostrophe to a beverage container, then became a pretty profound meditation on life and existence. You also maintained ...

I can relate to your frustration; I too came from a pentecostal background, though mine was perhaps less strict. I think this has a lot of potential as a monologue ...

Hello there, love! I'm Warrior Princess, and I will be reviewing your monologue today. Actually, it's going to be a pretty lame review, just a bunch of little technical nitpicks, ...

Suspened somewhere between poetry and prose . . . some of the loveliest writing can be found in this particular netherworld, and this piece is no exception. Your language is ...

I love this poem, particularly the style in which it was written. Your words are also quite beautiful. It's very short, perhaps a little more so than I'd prefer, but ...

Well, everybody else has given nice, long, detailed reviews it seems, so I shall spare us both the time and say AWESOME JOB. No, awesome doesn't even begin to cover ...

Ello there pet! I, Stephanie the Warrior Princess, shall be reviewing your story today. Let me start out by saying I love the action; it's not an easy feat to ...

Well, I have to disagree with silented1, featured member though he may be. XD I didn't think it was boring, actually I liked it quite a bit. Occasionally the words ...

This is pretty deep. Abstract, almost; not everything was very clear. But maybe you intended it to be that way. One thing I don't quite understand is, who exactly is ...

I have to disagree with Adam--I LOVED this poem. Loved, loved, loved. And I loved the formatting. Sure, it made the poem slightly harder to read, but it also made ...

One good thing about this is that the rhyme is consistent and didn't feel forced. There wasn't much of a rhythm, but then, I'm a firm believer in poetic freedom, ...

I like this. A good thing I noticed about it is the merging of a conversational style with poetic imagery. The punctuation isn't always consistent, but that's easily fixed. A ...

This was actually pretty dang hilarious. It got a little confusing in some parts, but I like how you show the narrator as living very much in his own mind. ...

I strongly disagree with the above posts. I loved this! So it was a little list-y, but so what? I like how you characterize each type of music (a few ...